Revising Writing - Week 6

 Revising Writing

Week 6, Reading Task


I found the feedback I got from my peers quite useful. The feedback they gave me was very helpful. All three Ella, Christelle, and Kate gave me a full breakdown of my blog letting me know what I did well but also what I could improve and add to it. 


I enjoyed reading their feedback and getting insight from other people. All the feedback I got was super kind and I will definitely be using their advice in my upcoming blogs. 


I learned that I have not been using references in my previous blogs but after the feedback, I was given extremely helpful advice on how to reference since I was struggling on how to reference in my blogs


Comments

Post a Comment

Popular posts from this blog

Study Skills

Image
  Study Skills Week 3, Video tasks In the series of videos that I watched, I learned many study skills from them to set myself up for success and make my college life a little bit easier. In the first video, 'The 3 Best science-based study tips' uses many different resources from universities and professional studies. Mike states that he is a doctor working in California. He shows evidence-based learning strategies about how to study for exams and how to train our brains effectively while backing everything up by science.  What I learned is that the more brainpower and effort one uses, the more retention one will get. This is because you can learn more under difficult conditions since it would be harder to forget. This had made me realise why many people in my life had told me that trying to study lying down or on your bed won't work as well, this now makes sense as to why.  There is a study by Kornell that states ultimately quizzing yourself is a great strategy for study...
Read more

Peer Review #1

Peer Review #1 Week 5, Reading Task  For this week's reading task, we were asked to review a blog from 2 of our peers. I had received two blogs that I found very well written and it was interesting and insightful to see how they differed from mine and each other.  I learned a lot from reading these blogs by my fellow classmates. I learned that people have very different writing styles even if it is writing on the same topic and I personally found that really engaging.  I also learned that everything can always use some constructive criticism or advice. Although the blogs I have read were exceptional and written great, there was still room for improvement.  I had also compared my peer's blogs and my blogs to gain insight on how I can also improve my blogs. Their blogs also helped me how to reference since I found it difficult to insert references into my blogs. The blogs I read taught me a lot about how people's opinions can differ so much and it was interesting to re...
Read more

Rewrite #1

Image
 Rewrite #1 Week 6, Rewrite #1 In the series of videos that I watched, I learned many study skills from them to set myself up for success and make my college life a little bit easier. [Reference: "The 3 BEST science-based study tips" - Mike and Matty https://youtu.be/UEJmgaFQUH8] In the first video, 'The 3 Best science-based study tips' uses many different resources from universities and professional studies. Mike states that he is a doctor working in California. He shows evidence-based learning strategies about how to study for exams and how to train our brains effectively while backing everything up by science.  What I learned is that the more brainpower and effort one uses, the more retention one will get. This is because you can learn more under difficult conditions since it would be harder to forget. This had made me realise why many people in my life had told me that trying to study lying down or on your bed won't work as well, this now makes sense as to why...
Read more